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Writing-Selectivitat (using the dictionary)



In June 2005 I corrected the exams of Selectivitat. I have copied down 5 compositions which I've ranged from very good to poor quality.

Correction guideline: wrong order / wrong word / spelling /leave out the word /a word missing/ grammar

Writing

Choose one topic. Write either 1 or 2. Minimum length: 100 words. (0-4 points)

1. Imagine you are a journalist interviewing Wangari Maathai. Write an interview where you ask about her project and its acceptance by African governments.

2. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper explaining the need to apply Maathai’s planting method of land protection in your own country. Explain the reasons why her plan would be beneficial for land, family and community improvement..


1st sample

Newspaper
C/ Doctors 12
08012 Barcelona
20th June 2005

Dear Editor,

I am writing to you because I feel it is absolutely necessary for our country to apply a planting method of land protection and I have a suggestion you would probably find interesting.

This planting method has been carried out by a Kenyan environmentalist, Wangari Maathai, and has had successful results in her country.

Maathai method would not be good only for land but also for a lot of families who would improve their social life. We can not forget our huge problems related to dry fields and some cases of deforestation which need a lot of help. In my opinion, planting trees around our country would improve our situation.

It would also help poor families to do something for our society as well as their own families. This method is a good way of given people a good sense of social concern.

It would be very kind of you if you could think about it for a while.

Thanks a lot for your attention.

Yours sincerely


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2nd sample
LaVanguardi
a
Av. Diagonal 347
08024 Barcelona

20th of June

Dear Sir/Miss,

I am writing to explain a project that has been developed in Kenya since 1977, and I personally think, would be useful in our society.

I am sure you have read about it in newspapers, it is Wangari Maathai’s project. In my opinion, this plan could be beneficial for land, now that our country is starting to be devastated by motorways, which will affect us enormously in a short period.

Second of all, I think that Catalan women are not independent enough, not as much as men, and I am sure this project would help them a lot.

Finally, I think that the community in general would agree to apply this plan, because there is not much vegetation in big cities, and this makes them very boring.

I hope the idea is cheerfully accepted.

Yours sincerely

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3rd sample


Greenpeace News

Ladybird Street, 89
4301 Oxford (UK)

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you in regard to a new planting method that would help fighting against deforestation and land erosion in our country.

Taking the original idea from Wangari Maathai, the Kenyan environmentalist, the plan would consist in beggining to assume the task of tree plantation. This simple task , as many African countries have already proved it is obviously beneficial for land, but also for the community improvement, since __ helps people being aware of social and environmental problems and by getting conscience of the problems the solution gets closer.

In addition, the Green Belt Movement would help the country’s economy and this way it would improve the quality of life too, since the benefit taken from the wood would be shared regarding to each family’s need.

I hope you seriously consider the idea and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully

Bridt Wülfen

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4th sample

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to tell you I think the Maathai’s planting will be good in our country. Nowadays there are a lot of buildings and in fact they are making more and more residential buildings and using a green areas to do that. I think that if we use the Maathai’s planting method we will have more green areas and in the other hand we will combat the erosion and we will produce sustainable wood for the uses that we need more. And if we do that we will helping the environment of the country and world. I wish you understood me because I think that is a good idea for all I said. You have to think that the environment will be the future of the humanity and we have to do anything now. It is right, other countries are worse than Spain and all the countries must begin to work in the environment now because with some years __ will be so late.

Yours faithfully. (Thanks for all)

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4th sample

-Hello Wangari

-Hi

-You have been recently awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for the creation of the Green Belt Movement. Could you explain us a little bit about what this organization is?

-Basically, The Green Belt Movement is an organization which employs women with poor resources in the area of Sudan and Kenya. Those women’s jobs are to plant trees and, in this way, help protecting the forests and the land.

-So, how could you recive a peace prize for such an organization?

-Well, because the Green Belt Movement isn't only an organization to protect the environment. The reforestation prevents conflicts which are caused by the lack of fertile soil.

- It seems as your organization helps society in many ways. Are there more benefits you would like to tell us about?

- Yes. By employing women we help them to become more independent and this benefits all the family structure.

- Thanks for giving us such impressive and amazing explanations.

- Thanks to you. Bye!

-Bye!

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5th sample


Dear director,

One__ __ reasons of my letter are __I think the Maathai´s planting method of land protection may be beneficial to our country.

You know that our country has got a lot of slabs of arid soil, the women don't work because the gobernment don't want it and the family is very destroying.

The Maathai's planting method has resolt this problems on other country. and I think that it may do in the our country too. I know very well the problems of women, of arid soil and of family, and if the country no to stop this problems, it will increasing very much.

Love